Sunday, May 26, 2013

Advantages of Being Smart and Ugly Against of Beautiful and Dumb

People are created by God, and they don’t have an ability to change themselves in a better way. Some people hope to be in other places or with other families, but others wish to be smart or beautiful even they will lose the beauty or the intelligence in order to get the second one. Most of people look for what they don’t have to be perfect, but they can’t be that because we are still human being who are greedy, and we can’t be easy content about what we are. But which one is more important today? Being beautiful and dumb or smart and ugly? In my opinion, being smart and ugly is better than being beautiful and foolish.

People who are smart are usually successful in their life for many reasons. They can get good grades in a school and have their dream job. Then they can start their life by choosing smartly a suitable wife. Smart people capable of managing their lives, and they have wisdom to make it continue. In contrast, beautiful and stupid people can get a good life, but it’s easy to lose it quickly for them because they lack of abilities to keep it ongoing.

Being smart has also good advantages even you are ugly. One of them is making good relationships with the community. People like to follow smart people and hear from them what they are saying. It can lead to have a good position in the society after several successful steps of course. Making the society much better than before and lead the people to the right way to have a good life. However, being beautiful and foolish may not do that, and it can be successful in another minor society such as fashion or music.

Finally, smart and ugly people can develop and improve the country and give a good perspective about the community than the beautiful and dumb ones. The society looks to scientists and professors how they are smart, and they don’t care if they are beautiful or ugly. Most of people appreciate those smart people and their works will be exist and people will remember those people what they did for them. Unlike the most beautiful and dumb people, people might remember them for a short time.


As we can see, being smart and ugly can lead to a successful life and make it interesting. Now, people become more rational, and they think that the beauty is to be smart. Most of jobs for those who have good qualifications and not for dumb people. The life can be stabilized by intelligent people, and it’s been developing with them. 

5 comments:

  1. Hi Mohammad

    Over all ,you job is nice.but , I think the first sentence from the first paragraph you could use it as thesis statement instead of topic for the first paragraph ,More over , I thinks the Second paragraph and the third one both of them talk about communication you can make these two paragraphs as one ,

    /thanks manal

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    1. I will consider your points next time, thank you for your comment

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  2. Hi mohammed,

    great essay!

    I like your orgnization of essay and ideas. Whereas, some of your idea sounds repetitive and some paragraph need combine in one as manal mention.

    good luck
    Abdulrahman
    :)

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  3. Your writing skills are advanced, but I think that you can organise your ideas better.
    Good job.
    Keep it up.

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  4. I really liked the line "they will lose the beauty or the intelligence in order to get the second one" - that is very true and well written. It's true that if you are smart you can be a leader in society, but we have also picked leaders just because they look like leaders. Charisma and looks go a long way in society, too!

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