More fun means more creativity. Worker waits his weekend of vacation end to go back to his work. Corporations are going to make a lot of profits and their workers are content with their jobs. Workers don’t like a routine. One of the motivations is to make employees happy and make them work hard by their will. A lot of innovations come from this way. You are right if you say a high salary is important but it’s not a significant factor that contributes the success of corporations and workers. In addition, employees won’t feel stressed and their life usually happy.
As you can see, an enjoyable job can constitute your life better and empty from health and society problems such as marital problems and depression. Life is beautiful and money makes people thinking differently.
Hi I like you paragraph but you need to use transition world to make your paragraph more coherent .Good job
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Hi Mohammed!
ReplyDeleteI like your idea and I completely agree with you that "Working under stress can make life worse and undesirable". Good job!
Your hook Baited me! I thought it was for another essay! but you did a great job to link between that weird hook and the subject.
ReplyDeleteI like your ideas. I agree with that fun makes job more desirable!
Married life can also be affected by a lack of money and cause stress. When you are married and have children, the importance of money will greatly increase!
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